Improve Karman and first crewed papers

GameData/RP-1/Strategies/Milestones.cfg

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ RP0_MILESTONE
 	name = KarmanLineMilestone
 	contractName = KarmanLine
 	headline = ROCKET REACHES SPACE
-	article = <color=#0000>(tab)</color>A <<2>> rocket has shot out of the atmosphere and into space. This marks the beginning of a new era, where the stars will start to seem closer and closer.\n<color=#0000>(tab)</color>Historical Information: The first real life rocket to do this was MW 18014 on 20 June 1944, which was, well, a Nazi missile test. Captured V-2s were put to scientific use after the war; let us hope that your space program takes inspiration from that use instead.
+	article = <color=#0000>(tab)</color>A <<2>> rocket has shot out of the atmosphere and into space on a mission of scientific discovery. For the first time, rocketry is not a weapon of hostile destruction, but an instrument to further our understanding of the universe. We are all hoping that as an age of world wars ends, an age of cosmic discovery will begin and this flight marks the beginning of an era where the stars will start to seem closer and closer.\n<color=#0000>(tab)</color>Historical Information: The first real life rocket to do this was V-2 No. 3 on 10 May 1946. Launched from White Sands as part of the Hermes program, it carried a geiger counter to measure cosmic radiation. The Hermes program combined scientific and military objectives, but it still marked the first suborbital spaceflight to carry scientific instruments.
 	image = RP-1/Strategies/MilestoneImages/KarmanLine
 }
 
@@ -100,16 +100,18 @@ RP0_MILESTONE
 
 RP0_MILESTONE
 {
-	name = LunarOrbiter
+	name = LunarOrbiterMilestone
+	contractName = LunarOrbiter
 	headline = THE MOON HAS A NEW SATELLITE
 	article = <color=#0000>(tab)</color><<2>> has become the first human-made object to orbit around the Moon. This new satellite will be used to gather information and scientists expect to learn more about the Moon from this orbiter than they have in the last 50 years.\n<color=#0000>(tab)</color>Historical Information: Luna 10 was the first human-made object to successfully orbit around another celestial body. It entered Lunar orbit on April 4, 1966, and continued to operate until May 30, 1966.
 	image = RP-1/Strategies/MilestoneImages/LunarOrbiter
 }
 
 RP0_MILESTONE
 {
-	name = first_OrbitCrewed
-	headline = 'I CAN SEE EVERYTHING,' SAYS FIRST HUMAN IN ORBIT
-	article = <color=#0000>(tab)</color><<1>> became the first human to enter into an orbit around Earth. Piloting the <<2>> spacecraft, the young astronaut experienced a full orbit of our planet in only 90 minutes. When the time came, <<1>> fired the craft's retro rockets and safely landed back on Earth.\n<color=#0000>(tab)</color>Historical Information: Yuri Gagarin was the first human in space, accomplishing that feat on April 12, 1961. Vostok 1 was launched from Baikonur Cosmodrome, oribted the Earth one time with the flight lasting a total of 108 minutes.
+	name = firstOrbitCrewedMilestone
+	contractName = first_OrbitCrewed
+	headline = "I CAN SEE EVERYTHING," SAYS FIRST HUMAN IN ORBIT
+	article = <color=#0000>(tab)</color>Sitting atop a pillar of fuel, <<1>> had a fire lit under them and was shot into space, becoming the first human to enter into an orbit around Earth. Piloting the <<2>> spacecraft, the young astronaut experienced a full orbit of our planet in only 90 minutes. They commented "I can see everything. As I look down at the Earth, I can say there is no greater beauty I have ever experienced. This is a wonderful planet. The lights of the cities at night, the fields, the deserts, the oceans, the mountains. It all shows the vast wonder of nature and the amazing efforts we have taken to make our place in it. We must protect this great planet." When the time came, <<1>> fired the craft's retro rockets and safely landed back on Earth.\n<color=#0000>(tab)</color>Historical Information: Yuri Gagarin was the first human in space, accomplishing that feat on April 12, 1961. Vostok 1 was launched from Baikonur Cosmodrome, orbited the Earth one time with the flight lasting a total of 108 minutes.
 	image = RP-1/Strategies/MilestoneImages/FirstCrewedOrbit
 }